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What Is Free Indirect Style? A Narrator Borrowing a Character's Voice

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A third-person narrator can slip into the vocabulary, rhythm and judgement of a character without quotation marks or any signal that it has happened. The technique gives a novel access to a mind while keeping the narrator's distance available.

How it works

Direct speech quotes a character in their own words and marks it. Reported speech converts those words into the narrator's, adjusting pronouns and tenses and flattening the character's manner. Free indirect style does neither, keeping the third person and the past tense of narration while adopting the character's vocabulary, emphasis, questions and evaluations, so a sentence belongs grammatically to the narrator and sounds like the character. The reader is not told the shift has occurred and detects it from the diction, from an exclamation or question that a narrator would not produce, or from a judgement that is clearly the character's. That undeclared shift is the entire technique, and the resulting ambiguity about who is speaking is a resource rather than a defect.

What it makes possible

The technique does several things that neither quotation nor plain narration can:

  • Access to a character's thoughts without the awkwardness of writing them as internal speech
  • Irony, since the narrator's frame remains available and a character's self-serving thought can be reported without endorsement
  • Movement between characters within a scene, dipping into each without announcement
  • Sympathy and distance simultaneously, which is the effect most associated with it
  • Compression, since a paragraph can carry both events and a character's response without separating them
  • Uncertainty about endorsement, which some novels exploit deliberately by leaving it unresolvable

Where it came from

The technique appears occasionally in earlier writing and became a central resource of the novel from the early nineteenth century. Austen is the writer most associated with its development in English, using it so pervasively that the reader is frequently uncertain whether a judgement is the character's or the narrator's, which is the source of much of the irony in her novels and of the disagreements about what she thought. Flaubert developed it in French with a colder effect, using it to report a character's illusions without comment. It became standard through the nineteenth century and was extended by modernist writers towards fuller representation of thought. The technique has been identified in earlier and non-European texts, and its rise with the novel reflects what that form was trying to do rather than a discovery.

The related techniques

Several neighbouring approaches to representing a mind are worth distinguishing. Interior monologue presents a character's thoughts as though transcribed, in the first person and present tense, which is direct and loses the narrator entirely. Stream of consciousness attempts to reproduce the texture of thought including its disorder and incompleteness, which is a further step and is what several modernist novels are known for. Psycho-narration has the narrator describe a character's mental state in the narrator's own terms, which is the plainest option. First-person narration gives access to one mind by construction and cannot move between them. Second-person narration addresses the reader as the character, which is rare and conspicuous. Free indirect style sits between psycho-narration and interior monologue and gets its effect from occupying that middle position rather than committing to either.

Reading it

Noticing the technique changes how a novel reads and the signals are learnable. A shift in vocabulary towards a character's register is the commonest, so a narrator who has been writing formally producing a colloquial or excitable phrase has generally moved. Questions and exclamations in a narrative passage belong to somebody, and rarely to the narrator. Evaluative words that the narrator has no reason to use indicate whose judgement is operating. Words such as now and today appearing in past tense narration place the reader in the character's present rather than the narrator's. The consequence for interpretation is substantial, since a statement that looks like the novel's own position may be a character's, and a great deal of critical disagreement about particular books turns on exactly that question.

The takeaway

The narrator keeps the third person and past tense while adopting the character's vocabulary and judgement, with no quotation marks and no signal that it happened. That gives access to a mind while keeping the narrator's frame available, which is how the technique produces sympathy and irony at once. Austen used it so pervasively that whose judgement is operating is frequently undecidable.

Practise this

Questions from Classic Literature

Reading about something is not the same as being able to recall it. These are real questions from the Classic Literature unit in our Language & Literature track, answers and explanations included. The unit has 123 in total across 21 steps.

  • Odd one outLevel 3

    1. Which of these is NOT an ancient epic poem?

    • Pride and Prejudicecorrect
    • The Iliad
    • The Aeneid
    • The Odyssey

    "Pride and Prejudice" is a 19th century novel by Jane Austen, not an ancient epic.

  • Guess the numberLevel 3

    2. How many lines does a Shakespearean sonnet have?

    Answer: 14 lines

    A Shakespearean sonnet has 14 lines: three quatrains and a closing couplet.

  • Fill the blankLevel 3

    3. F. Scott Fitzgerald's novel about the mysterious millionaire Jay Gatsby is called The Great ____.

    • Gatsbycorrect
    • Carraway
    • Buchanan
    • American

    "The Great Gatsby" was published in 1925 and is set in the Jazz Age.